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On the curb again
Like so many times before
I've been tossed around so much
Now I barely feel it when my heart hits the floor
And that's a lie
Because when I open myself up
And you do this to me
I want to scratch myself out
So no one can see
I've walked around for hours
Trying to understand
Tearing myself apart
I'm left only with blood on my hands
The thoughts keep spinning
Inside my head
When I think of you
I wish I were dead
But I'll fake it
Pretend like I don't care
I won't give you the satisfaction
Of my pain
Though you would never see it
Because you're never there
©2004-2009 ~ShadedRain
:iconshadedrain:

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Written 2003.

Image is titled "Once Thought Benign" from: tcdesign.net

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Wow, that is pretty good, I liked the flow of this baby alot, lots of pain expressed in this, which is really a shame. Why must poetry sprout from something so ragged as pain? I like it though...

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I could be your carpenter, and you could be my twinkling north star over the desert sky.

SIERRA!
:iconshadedrain:
Poetry grows out of intense emotions... not always pain, but yeah, mine usually does.

Thanks. Glad you like it.

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